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Princess Luna by Xeirla

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Again I say-Best Princess!

I like the varied strokes you used to create this particular picture. One somewhat odd thing is where the wings are coming from-while even, they look like the bases terminate at her cutie mark, which is entirely too far back. The wings themselves are nice in terms of general shape, but look rather messy when it comes to actual feathers.

Her mane and tail-I'm not sure if you were going for 'Luna just returned from the moon', in which case they should be shorter, or 'Luna growing back into about where she should be now', in which case they should be ethereal, flowing, and full of stars. Her horn should also be a bit longer.

I really like the feel of the picture-like she was happily and casually fluttering along when this picture was caught, making her look happy and approachable. This sets you apart from most that draw Luna, as so many draw her as a dark and mysterious, unapproachable being.

Also-well done on the eye and eyelashes.
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regidar Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
This critique is invalid because she said Luna is best Princess, when it is clearly Discord who is best Princess.
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Squigglz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:o rood
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regidar Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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Xeirla Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you silly fillies :3
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regidar Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
:meow:
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Xeirla Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the critique! :D
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Squigglz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime ^^
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